托福寫作中的論點(diǎn)的展開小tips

中的論點(diǎn)的展開是很多學(xué)生最大的問題，在論點(diǎn)的展開方向上我們是要有方法的.比如把名詞把握住進(jìn)行分開展開。

解題找分論點(diǎn)例子：

(1). People will spend less time cooking and preparing food in twenty years than they do today.

現(xiàn)象題型-時(shí)間花得少的原因：

總觀點(diǎn)： I believe the trend is true.

1. First, the advancing technology is making cooking less time-consuming. [方便] 越來越多的新的廚房科技出現(xiàn)，比如微波爐，洗碗機(jī)，攪拌機(jī)，會(huì)使人們花更少的時(shí)間在準(zhǔn)備和烹飪事物。

2. Second, the fast paced life will deprive people of the time to cook. 毫無疑問，現(xiàn)代生活變得越來越忙，很多人沒有選擇只能出去吃或者吃快餐。

3. Third, people can easily afford to eat out. [錢] 人們收入的提升導(dǎo)致他們更愿意去高級(jí)餐廳吃美味的飯菜犒勞自己。

4. Commercialization will make possible freedom from cooking. ( ready-to-eat food ) 快餐食物，發(fā)達(dá)的外賣 比人們自己做更方便，所以也導(dǎo)致人們不愿再做飯了。

(2). Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does?

現(xiàn)象題目;happiness 約等于 滿足人們的需求;所以實(shí)質(zhì)還是分析 job/ social life的好處、壞處

總觀點(diǎn)： jobs play bigger roles than social life.

1. It is a decent job that determines a good material life. 【錢】---有足夠的錢才能住得起好的住宅，去高級(jí)餐廳吃飯，去周游世界。而這是無論多么熱鬧的社交生活提供不了的。

2. A decent job also provides better conditions for family. 【人際】---有高工資才能負(fù)擔(dān)得起豪華的家庭旅行或者送孩子去一流的寄宿學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。然后，如果有很多聚會(huì)要去參加，有很多朋友要去交往，人們反而沒有時(shí)間去照顧病床上的妻子，輔導(dǎo)做作業(yè)有困難的孩子。

3. A job can also offer one a sense of self-betterment, which leads to happiness. 【成就感】---工作無疑能讓一個(gè)人體會(huì)克服挑戰(zhàn)的艱辛并且品味克服挑戰(zhàn)之后的喜悅。這也是人們?cè)诰蹠?huì)，社交聊天中體會(huì)不到的。[注意比較]

(3). university students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study.

利弊題目;分析 basic classes 的好處，壞處

總觀點(diǎn)：I disagree with the statement.

1. Making basic science mandatory does not cater to post-university goals. ---很多同學(xué)上大學(xué)是為了找工作，跟自己專業(yè)無關(guān)的學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容對(duì)以后就業(yè)沒有用。

2. Besides, students with no interest in science would lack the proper motivation to learn it well. 【學(xué)業(yè)】

3. Offering basic science to all the students would be a huge drain on school’s human and financial resources. 【錢】---學(xué)校要雇更多的老師去教這些額外的學(xué)生，還要安排更多的教室來容納多出來的班級(jí)。

(4). it is more important to have rules about the types of clothing that people wear at work or at school.

利弊題目，分析 穿著規(guī)則的 好處,壞處

總觀點(diǎn): it is a good policy.

有規(guī)則的好處：

1. It will save them a lot of money on buying clothes. 【錢】如果沒有rules, 人們會(huì)花更多地錢去購置每個(gè)季節(jié)需要的jacket, windcheater 和與之相配的shoes; 更別說追逐時(shí)尚的人根據(jù)潮流更新自己的服飾。

2. Students dressing styles on formal occasions remind employees and students to concentrate more on their duties. 不會(huì)因?yàn)閾?dān)心穿做而分心 【學(xué)業(yè)/工作】

3. Dressing rules help display favorable images to the public. 統(tǒng)一的制服會(huì)給顧客更加專業(yè)的印象。

壞處：

1. Admittedly, obeying rules of dress at work or at school means the denial of fashion and beauty. 【個(gè)性性格】

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