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托福寫作是中國(guó)考生除了口語之外的第二大弱項(xiàng)，其中語法、用詞以及邏輯思維是寫作的問題所在，只有在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解托福寫作中滿分作文的邏輯思維，從哪方面考慮問題，句型難度，才可更好的進(jìn)行鍛煉。下面我們一起來欣賞這篇滿分作文吧!
　　　
　　New findings in scientific areas can examine and challenge previous assumptions. A recent finding concerning the meerkat, a burrow-dwelling animal in the African grasslands, has cast doubt upon the conventional ideas of altruism, the type of behavior in which an animal sacrifices its own interests for the benefit of another.
　　　
　　Meerkats were previously thought to be a typical altruistic animal. When the other meerkats feed, there is usually one meerkat watching out for predators. The sentinel meerkat gains nothing, it seems, for it can neither eat nor escape quickly and successfully after raising an alarm.
　　　
　　However, in the new findings, it's shown that the sentinel meerkat has already eaten food before standing guard, thus contradicting the thought that it has an empty belly while on the lookout. In addition to this, the sentinel is the first to see a predator, so it is the first to escape. It is also placed nearest a burrow, making it relatively easier to flee. Moreover, its alarm calls may cause the group either to gather or to spread rapidly, which may attract the predator's attention, providing the sentinel a better chance to escape.
　　　
　　The same is with supposed human altruistic behavior. Organ donation to strangers may be considered an unselfish act, which provides little reward to the donator. However, by donating his organ, the donator may most probably receive praise and appreciation from others. Isn't this non-material reward, which increases one's self worth, satisfactory to anyone?
　　　
　　以上這篇托福寫作僅供參考，本人并不贊成模板模式的寫作，因?yàn)殚喚淼娜艘仓�道有模板這個(gè)東西，我建議應(yīng)該從思維上改變?nèi)�寫作文，就是用美式思維法寫作文。美國(guó)人的思維是線性思維。即典型“總---分---總”的寫作思維。這種思維源于美國(guó)的presentation。即美國(guó)學(xué)生在課堂上的演說。他們做這種演說所遵循的原則是總---分---總。在新托福寫作中，用這種思維最容易獲得高分。

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